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Topic title - Cover creation for Enderal

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Cover creation for Enderal - by Celestis

Posted: 11.04.2015 11:12

Hello Enderal Frinds.

This ist my Enderal Cover creation.

I draw even more

I dont no speak Englich.

I´m from german.

Translated by Google
sorry

Re: Cover creation for Enderal - by Celestis

Posted: 14.04.2015 08:34

The Cover in large format.

I wish you much fun with it.

More will follow

translated by google

Re: Cover creation for Enderal - by Celestis

Posted: 14.04.2015 10:53

Here is a DVD Cover

Re: Cover creation for Enderal - by Celestis

Posted: 23.07.2018 11:30

Hello Enderal friends
Here's a new idea for Enderal + DLC Cover v. 1.7.2
HQ Cover will arrive in a few days.

Re: Cover creation for Enderal - by Eledwen

Posted: 23.07.2018 21:33

Looking good!

Re: Cover creation for Enderal - by Celestis

Posted: 26.07.2018 12:52

Here is the first Enderal Dark side Edition Test DVD v. 1.1
What do you think?

Re: Cover creation for Enderal - by Jaknet

Posted: 27.07.2018 08:24

I really love the cover and the artwork, apart from the first sentence on the back,

Two years after the events of Nehrim - At Fate's Edge awaits you in Enderal a completely.....

it just doesn't seem right in English and feels a bit jarring, a few suggestions if you don't mind

...Fate's Edge, there awaits for you in Enderal...

....Fate's Edge .Enderal, a completely new adventure awaits you / waits for you...

and anything else that comes to mind.

Sorry for being picky

Edit. The guilds sentence below the images, shouldn't the apostrophe in Merchants' Guild be before the [s] as in Merchant's Guild instead of after the [s] as it now is?

Edit 2.... Sorry I'm probably overthinking now I've started, but the end of the top text, might it read better as......The latest work from SureAI....?

Re: Cover creation for Enderal - by Celestis

Posted: 29.07.2018 18:02

@Jaknet
Well I can not speak english sorry

Google translater
Maybe you can translate the text correctly and I'll create a new Cover

Re: Cover creation for Enderal - by Jaknet

Posted: 31.07.2018 07:04

There's really only 3 changes I'd make.

Two years after the events of Nehrim - At Fate's Edge awaits you in Enderal a completely new adventure.

Two years after the events of Nehrim - At Fate's Edge, there awaits for you in Enderal a completely new adventure.

Two guild questlines: Join the Golden Sickle, Enderal's most influential merchants' guild

Two guild questlines: Join the Golden Sickle, Enderal's most influential merchant's guild

high level crafting and enchantment that makes investing in craftmanship a lot more rewarding.

high level crafting and enchantments that makes investing in craftmanship a lot more rewarding.

Hope this makes sense in translation

Re: Cover creation for Enderal - by badgesareus

Posted: 31.07.2018 08:53

I would suggest:

Two years after the events of Nehrim - At Fate's Edge, a completely new adventure awaits you in Enderal.

Two guild questlines: Join the Golden Sickle, Enderal's most influential merchants' guild.

Merchants' (plural) is correct because there are several merchants.

high level crafting and enchantments that make investing in workmanship much more rewarding.

"Workmanship" is the term actually used in the game.

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