Thanks Kassandra -- I actually discovered what the problem was, so I'll put it here in case anyone encounters the same problem. I ended up starting a whole new game which worked, and I have an idea why:
When I first got to the stage where I had to get in the trolly to escape the black troll, I pulled the lever but it said it was broken, so just trying to get away from the black troll I jumped up on the cables (where it was supposed to follow me, as I found out with the new game) and ran across that way. The next time (the new game), I tried standing on the opposite side of the lever as I had before (if facing the pit, it would be to the left of the lever) and the trolly took me across and everything worked as it should have as far as the trolly went. Put the torches in the black troll's lair and things worked as they were supposed to. So anyway, point of this is that it seems for this first quest at least, it's important to go through every step exactly as you're supposed to, otherwise things won't work.