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04.08.2018 07:28Jaknet hat geschrieben:

Sorry for causing complications

is not bad Jaknet
I like it complicated

I do not know which one to take? Your Jaknet or badgesareus?
Both translations can be correct ^^ But which?

04.08.2018 12:16Celestis hat geschrieben:

is not bad Jaknet
I like it complicated

I can add a couple more options of how to say it if you fancy then

04.08.2018 12:16Celestis hat geschrieben:

I do not know which one to take? Your Jaknet or badgesareus?
Both translations can be correct ^^ But which? [/b]

Personally I'd go with badgesareus as I feel it reads better, smoother than mine.

Two years after the events of Nehrim - At Fate's Edge, a completely new adventure awaits you in Enderal.

New

A standalone History of Skyrim

Previous and better

A story independent of Skyrim

New

Over 100 hours gametime and many more re waitin (not a word in UK spelling ) for you in Enderal

Previous and better

Over 100 hours gametime and much more awaits for you in Enderal

Just a couple of corrections due to spelling and incorrect statement about the history of skyrim.
Hope this helps

Over 100 hours gametime and much more awaits for you in Enderal

Should be "await" not "awaits" because "100 hours gametime and much more" is plural not singular.

At Fate's Edge awaits you in Enderal a completely new adventure.

English grammar "a completely new adventure awaits you" (delete "for").

06.08.2018 22:29badgesareus hat geschrieben:

Over 100 hours gametime and much more awaits for you in Enderal

Should be "await" not "awaits" because "100 hours gametime and much more" is plural not singular.

I respectfully disagree, and this will probably sound a bit pedantic, but please bear with me.

When using 'more', both singular and plural are acceptable, depending on the specific sentence structure as a whole. If 'more' refers to something specific and countable (e.g. things, adventures, etc.), then of course plural is the way to go. However, when you use 'much' as a quantifier, you refer to concepts or objects that cannot be counted in numbers (e.g. much water, much of your life, not much change, etc.). In spoken English, phrases like 'this much' or 'that much' are followed by gestures that represent a certain but not specific amount of something or other.

So, in the sentence "Over 100 hours gametime and much more awaits for you in Enderal", the deciding factor is that 'much more' refers to not only game hours, but game content that only hinted at. Even if you expanded the sentence to include 'over 100 hours game time, dozens of quests, wonderfully voiced NPCs and much more' the verb form would still be 'awaits', as 'much more' sums up all the previous information and hints at things unsaid and unknown. Only if you rephrased the sentence to include 'many more / other exciting things' (not a good example, I know, because 'much more' is difficult to replace) would you use the plural form of 'await'.

Just my two cents.

hours gametime and much more

The "deciding factor" is basic English grammar. The subject of the sentence "Hours and more" is plural, just like "roses and violets" would be plural; therefore, the third person plural form of the verb is required, which is "await." You are suggesting that somehow you can completely ignore the "and" ; also that "100 hours gametime" even though it is clearly part of the subject of the sentence somehow doesn't require any verb.

In this sentence "much" is an adjective that modifies "more" which is a noun in this usage. Also it would be incorrect to follow "await" with a preposition such as "for."

I would also note that the proper form would be to write "100 hours of gametime.