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Cover creation for Enderal

Verfasst: 11.04.2015 11:12
von Celestis
Hello Enderal Frinds.

This ist my Enderal Cover creation.

I draw even more

I dont no speak Englich.

I´m from german.


Translated by Google
sorry

Re: Cover creation for Enderal

Verfasst: 14.04.2015 08:34
von Celestis
The Cover in large format.

I wish you much fun with it.

More will follow :)


translated by google

Re: Cover creation for Enderal

Verfasst: 14.04.2015 10:53
von Celestis
Here is a DVD Cover

Re: Cover creation for Enderal

Verfasst: 23.07.2018 11:30
von Celestis
Hello Enderal friends :)
Here's a new idea for Enderal + DLC Cover v. 1.7.2
HQ Cover will arrive in a few days.

Re: Cover creation for Enderal

Verfasst: 23.07.2018 21:33
von Eledwen
Looking good!

Re: Cover creation for Enderal

Verfasst: 26.07.2018 12:52
von Celestis
Here is the first Enderal Dark side Edition Test DVD v. 1.1
What do you think?

Re: Cover creation for Enderal

Verfasst: 27.07.2018 08:24
von Jaknet
I really love the cover and the artwork, apart from the first sentence on the back,
Two years after the events of Nehrim - At Fate's Edge awaits you in Enderal a completely.....
it just doesn't seem right in English and feels a bit jarring, a few suggestions if you don't mind

...Fate's Edge, there awaits for you in Enderal...

....Fate's Edge .Enderal, a completely new adventure awaits you / waits for you...

and anything else that comes to mind. :)

Sorry for being picky :wink:

Edit. The guilds sentence below the images, shouldn't the apostrophe in Merchants' Guild be before the [s] as in Merchant's Guild instead of after the [s] as it now is?

Edit 2.... Sorry I'm probably overthinking now I've started, but the end of the top text, might it read better as......The latest work from SureAI....?

Re: Cover creation for Enderal

Verfasst: 29.07.2018 18:02
von Celestis
@Jaknet
Well I can not speak english sorry :( Google translater
Maybe you can translate the text correctly and I'll create a new Cover :)

Re: Cover creation for Enderal

Verfasst: 31.07.2018 07:04
von Jaknet
There's really only 3 changes I'd make.


Two years after the events of Nehrim - At Fate's Edge awaits you in Enderal a completely new adventure.

Two years after the events of Nehrim - At Fate's Edge, there awaits for you in Enderal a completely new adventure.


Two guild questlines: Join the Golden Sickle, Enderal's most influential merchants' guild

Two guild questlines: Join the Golden Sickle, Enderal's most influential merchant's guild


high level crafting and enchantment that makes investing in craftmanship a lot more rewarding.

high level crafting and enchantments that makes investing in craftmanship a lot more rewarding.

Hope this makes sense in translation :)

Re: Cover creation for Enderal

Verfasst: 31.07.2018 08:53
von badgesareus
I would suggest:

Two years after the events of Nehrim - At Fate's Edge, a completely new adventure awaits you in Enderal.

Two guild questlines: Join the Golden Sickle, Enderal's most influential merchants' guild.

Merchants' (plural) is correct because there are several merchants.


high level crafting and enchantments that make investing in workmanship much more rewarding.

"Workmanship" is the term actually used in the game.