The lower part was written by Nico, which I really wanted to leave because he is passable.
Since there are two possibilities or ideas, that makes things complicated ^ ^
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Erfolg dauert nicht ewig. Misserfolg ist kein Verhängnis.
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04.08.2018 07:28Jaknet hat geschrieben: Sorry for causing complicationsis not bad Jaknet
I like it complicated
I do not know which one to take? Your Jaknet or badgesareus?
Both translations can be correct ^^ But which?
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04.08.2018 12:16Celestis hat geschrieben: is not bad JaknetI can add a couple more options of how to say it if you fancy then
I like it complicated
04.08.2018 12:16Celestis hat geschrieben: I do not know which one to take? Your Jaknet or badgesareus?Personally I'd go with badgesareus as I feel it reads better, smoother than mine.
Both translations can be correct ^^ But which? [/b]
Two years after the events of Nehrim - At Fate's Edge, a completely new adventure awaits you in Enderal.
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Two years after the events of Nehrim - At Fate's Edge awaits you in Enderal a completely new adventure.
A standalone History of Skyrim with many new places to discover. Over 100 hours gametime and many
more re waitin for you in Enderal - ,,The shards of Order", the newest masterpiece of SureAI."
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Two guild questlines: Join the Golden Sickle, Enderal's most influential merchants' guild.
Experience an exceptional non-linear story that deals with intrigue and greed.
Delve into the secrets behind the Rhalâta, the mysterious cult ruling the Undercity.
A story mission revolving around the Sea Of Eventualities and Yuslan Sha'Rim's past
A mission that allows the player to explore in detail the death of a certain character
A secret ending for the main-quest and a new class: the "Phasmalist"
A quest shedding light on the Veiled Woman's origins.
New bounty missions - New weapons and sets Several game-play changes and additions,
such as hidden talents, rebalanced and overhauled crafting skills, high-level crafting,
and enchantment that makes investing in craftsmanship a lot more rewarding.
Two years after the events of Nehrim - At Fate's Edge awaits you in Enderal a completely new adventure.
A standalone History of Skyrim with many new places to discover. Over 100 hours gametime and many
more re waitin for you in Enderal - ,,The shards of Order", the newest masterpiece of SureAI."
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Two guild questlines: Join the Golden Sickle, Enderal's most influential merchants' guild.
Experience an exceptional non-linear story that deals with intrigue and greed.
Delve into the secrets behind the Rhalâta, the mysterious cult ruling the Undercity.
A story mission revolving around the Sea Of Eventualities and Yuslan Sha'Rim's past
A mission that allows the player to explore in detail the death of a certain character
A secret ending for the main-quest and a new class: the "Phasmalist"
A quest shedding light on the Veiled Woman's origins.
New bounty missions - New weapons and sets Several game-play changes and additions,
such as hidden talents, rebalanced and overhauled crafting skills, high-level crafting,
and enchantment that makes investing in craftsmanship a lot more rewarding.
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Hope this helps
A standalone History of SkyrimPrevious and better
A story independent of SkyrimNew
Over 100 hours gametime and many more re waitin (not a word in UK spelling ) for you in EnderalPrevious and better
Over 100 hours gametime and much more awaits for you in EnderalJust a couple of corrections due to spelling and incorrect statement about the history of skyrim.
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Over 100 hours gametime and much more awaits for you in EnderalShould be "await" not "awaits" because "100 hours gametime and much more" is plural not singular.
At Fate's Edge awaits you in Enderal a completely new adventure.English grammar "a completely new adventure awaits you" (delete "for").
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06.08.2018 22:29badgesareus hat geschrieben:I respectfully disagree, and this will probably sound a bit pedantic, but please bear with me.Over 100 hours gametime and much more awaits for you in EnderalShould be "await" not "awaits" because "100 hours gametime and much more" is plural not singular.
When using 'more', both singular and plural are acceptable, depending on the specific sentence structure as a whole. If 'more' refers to something specific and countable (e.g. things, adventures, etc.), then of course plural is the way to go. However, when you use 'much' as a quantifier, you refer to concepts or objects that cannot be counted in numbers (e.g. much water, much of your life, not much change, etc.). In spoken English, phrases like 'this much' or 'that much' are followed by gestures that represent a certain but not specific amount of something or other.
So, in the sentence "Over 100 hours gametime and much more awaits for you in Enderal", the deciding factor is that 'much more' refers to not only game hours, but game content that only hinted at. Even if you expanded the sentence to include 'over 100 hours game time, dozens of quests, wonderfully voiced NPCs and much more' the verb form would still be 'awaits', as 'much more' sums up all the previous information and hints at things unsaid and unknown. Only if you rephrased the sentence to include 'many more / other exciting things' (not a good example, I know, because 'much more' is difficult to replace) would you use the plural form of 'await'.
Just my two cents.
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Now I have completely started the discussion
Since I think that's not so good (bad) and Google translator helps me,
but not the correct english represents .... I am on the help of the
Instructed community. Since the grammar is different in English,
as the in german.
I can only rely on what you write. Any help is welcome
The correct translation will probably take some time to get up agree
Well, finally, I also want to create a DVD cover for the English fans.
Because I was asked by many users from this community.It's just a
pity that those who asked me did not write here
Since I think that's not so good (bad) and Google translator helps me,
but not the correct english represents .... I am on the help of the
Instructed community. Since the grammar is different in English,
as the in german.
I can only rely on what you write. Any help is welcome
The correct translation will probably take some time to get up agree
Well, finally, I also want to create a DVD cover for the English fans.
Because I was asked by many users from this community.It's just a
pity that those who asked me did not write here
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hours gametime and much moreThe "deciding factor" is basic English grammar. The subject of the sentence "Hours and more" is plural, just like "roses and violets" would be plural; therefore, the third person plural form of the verb is required, which is "await." You are suggesting that somehow you can completely ignore the "and" ; also that "100 hours gametime" even though it is clearly part of the subject of the sentence somehow doesn't require any verb.
In this sentence "much" is an adjective that modifies "more" which is a noun in this usage. Also it would be incorrect to follow "await" with a preposition such as "for."
I would also note that the proper form would be to write "100 hours of gametime.
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