Cover creation for Enderal

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Hello Enderal Frinds.

This ist my Enderal Cover creation.

I draw even more

I dont no speak Englich.

I´m from german.


Translated by Google
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The Cover in large format.

I wish you much fun with it.

More will follow :)


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Here is a DVD Cover
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Hello Enderal friends :)
Here's a new idea for Enderal + DLC Cover v. 1.7.2
HQ Cover will arrive in a few days.
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Looking good!
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Here is the first Enderal Dark side Edition Test DVD v. 1.1
What do you think?
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I really love the cover and the artwork, apart from the first sentence on the back,
Two years after the events of Nehrim - At Fate's Edge awaits you in Enderal a completely.....
it just doesn't seem right in English and feels a bit jarring, a few suggestions if you don't mind

...Fate's Edge, there awaits for you in Enderal...

....Fate's Edge .Enderal, a completely new adventure awaits you / waits for you...

and anything else that comes to mind. :)

Sorry for being picky :wink:

Edit. The guilds sentence below the images, shouldn't the apostrophe in Merchants' Guild be before the [s] as in Merchant's Guild instead of after the [s] as it now is?

Edit 2.... Sorry I'm probably overthinking now I've started, but the end of the top text, might it read better as......The latest work from SureAI....?
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@Jaknet
Well I can not speak english sorry :( Google translater
Maybe you can translate the text correctly and I'll create a new Cover :)
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There's really only 3 changes I'd make.


Two years after the events of Nehrim - At Fate's Edge awaits you in Enderal a completely new adventure.

Two years after the events of Nehrim - At Fate's Edge, there awaits for you in Enderal a completely new adventure.


Two guild questlines: Join the Golden Sickle, Enderal's most influential merchants' guild

Two guild questlines: Join the Golden Sickle, Enderal's most influential merchant's guild


high level crafting and enchantment that makes investing in craftmanship a lot more rewarding.

high level crafting and enchantments that makes investing in craftmanship a lot more rewarding.

Hope this makes sense in translation :)
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I would suggest:

Two years after the events of Nehrim - At Fate's Edge, a completely new adventure awaits you in Enderal.

Two guild questlines: Join the Golden Sickle, Enderal's most influential merchants' guild.

Merchants' (plural) is correct because there are several merchants.


high level crafting and enchantments that make investing in workmanship much more rewarding.

"Workmanship" is the term actually used in the game.
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